Teen Moms

Terrible Teen Moms



  Teen pregnancy is a major problem nowadays. They don't think of the consequences of their actions and the aftermath of their irresponsibility can lead to pregnancy. Having  a child comes with a lot of responsibility. The teen doesn't understand that all free time is lost, that they will have to find some money to support their self and their child. The future of them will definitely change.

                In my opinion, the causes that make the girls pregnant are; first is the lack of communication between parents and their children, If the relationship is too weak or too overbearing the child can either not feel loved or obedient, which ultimately result in the child seeking for love in all of the wrong places. Second is the lack of sexual education, it is embarrassing in Thailand to talk or study about sex. So many people don’t dare to study about this and they also lack of knowledge too. Third is drinking and drugs, it will cause unconsciousness and possibly sexual intercourse by accident. Forth is the media, the main contributor. Young people often look to the media in order to see what the trend is or they look for how they should act, or be.


          Finally, I think teen girls should educate about safe sex for protect themselves, such as wearing a condom during sexual intercourse, taking emergency contraceptive pill after unprotected sex and etc. If you don’t protect, you will definitely be teen mom and it will make problems for you in the future.

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  1. Is this your story?!? Lol!
    I really love your main points because you can make me understand more about this topic and you make me realize this problem.
    This passage is great!!!
    10/10 <3

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  2. I once want to be your future 555555
    Your main points are okay for me because it's clear for that topic and make me know about the problem.
    I love you and your passage and all of my 10 points are for you ^^

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  3. This paragraph is good and detail is interesting. I give you 9 points.

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  4. Ohhhh! This story is quite you are the women who is pregnant hahahahaha!
    Just kidding. Your content is nearly great, but some grammar of you are quite wrong. For example, "I think teen girls should educate about safe sex for protect..... " . So, it is wrong, after the word "for" should be "noun" or "gerund".
    Therefore, I give 9 points.

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