Teen Moms
Terrible Teen Moms
Teen pregnancy is a major problem nowadays. They don't think of the
consequences of their actions and the aftermath of their irresponsibility can
lead to pregnancy. Having a
child comes with a lot of responsibility. The teen doesn't understand that all
free time is lost, that they will have to find some money to support their self
and their child. The future of them will definitely change.
In
my opinion, the causes that make the girls pregnant are; first is the lack of communication
between parents and their children, If the relationship is too weak or too
overbearing the child can either not feel loved or obedient, which ultimately
result in the child seeking for love in all of the wrong places. Second
is the lack of sexual education, it is embarrassing in Thailand to talk or
study about sex. So many people don’t dare to study about this and they also lack of knowledge too. Third is drinking and drugs, it will
cause unconsciousness and possibly sexual intercourse by accident. Forth is the
media, the main contributor. Young people often look to the media in order to
see what the trend is or they look for how they should act, or be.

Is this your story?!? Lol!
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10/10 <3
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This paragraph is good and detail is interesting. I give you 9 points.
ตอบลบOhhhh! This story is quite you are the women who is pregnant hahahahaha!
ตอบลบJust kidding. Your content is nearly great, but some grammar of you are quite wrong. For example, "I think teen girls should educate about safe sex for protect..... " . So, it is wrong, after the word "for" should be "noun" or "gerund".
Therefore, I give 9 points.