Place Describing

                                        Place Describing

                                                 

                                 My Greatest Christmas
             
Christmas is a big festival celebrated by the people in the winter season. Everyone enjoy a cultural holiday at this day. All the governmental (such as schools, colleges, universities, educational institutions, training centers, offices, etc.) and non-governmental organizations become closed at this day. People celebrate this festival with great enthusiasm and lots of preparations and decorations. It is celebrated every year on 25th of December. It is known as the Feast day of Christ and celebrated in the honor of birth of Jesus Christ. It is the day of great significance for the Christians.
Normally, the house of westerner or some Thai people will decorate their house with the big tree, called mistletoe. The mistletoe decorated by lots of little gifts.  In this day, the mistletoe standing on the right corner of my house. The fire  burning the charcoal in the chimney, it make the  atmosphere warmed by flame of fire. The shelves located next to the chimney has lots of my toys that the Santa gave me and my sister last year on it. I really love Christmas because it’s the day that my family does the activities together.
Finally, the important element things that you have to miss to buy are the mistletoe, gifts and chimney, it making a perfect Christmas. I hope you’ll find your Santa Claus when he comes to your house for giving you gifts once. Have a nice time when Christmas’s Day comes.

V.ing
- The fire  burning the charcoal in the chimney.
-  The mistletoe standing on the right corner of the room.
- It making a perfect Christmas.

V.ed
- The mistletoe  decorated by lots of little gifts.
- The shelves located next to the chimney.
- The atmosphere warmed by flame of fire.

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  1. Panida22 ตุลาคม 2560 เวลา 21:03



    Score is 10

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  2. sithichaiMeephewhom22 ตุลาคม 2560 เวลา 23:01

    ความคิดเห็นนี้ถูกผู้เขียนลบ

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  3. sithichaiMeephewhom23 ตุลาคม 2560 เวลา 07:09

    Your passage is pretty good. I like the way you wrote it. And you can use V.ed and V.ing to describe the things perfectly.
    Score 9

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  4. Sittisak Monjariyaphon15 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 07:21

    Your writing is quite good. Using V.ed and V.ing to describe the things are important for this course.
    My points are 9

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  5. Natthaphon Sawangsri15 พฤศจิกายน 2560 เวลา 23:04

    I can understand what you want me to know about your writing, but some sentences are wrong. For instance, " it make the atmosphere warmed by flame of fire." So, the word "make" should be "makes" because the word "it" is the singular noun. Thus, the verb after "it" shoud add "-s". So, I will give you 8.5 points.

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